Supernatural Writing Contest: Asmaa – Dark Death
This is our second entry in the Why Supernatural Should Come to My Town story contest, Asmaa. (NOTE: 24 April 2008: added images, that were omitted.)
Read this, as well as the other five entries, then cast your vote for your favorite!
..Dark Death..
It all started with an old evil lady that lives in a very dark place, she knows every single curse.. every single one of them.. Nobody knows that. She heard all the stuff that has been said about Sam, at the same time she knows how strong brotherhood relationship he have with Dean, then she realized that she can get to Sam by using Dean’s emotions. If she killed Dean then Sam is by him self. So she started to build a relationship with the boys, Dean loves the food she makes, and the fact that she treats him like her own son. Sam doesn’t like her that much… he thinks that she’s just an old witch…( Which is true)
In order to get to Sam she needs to get Dean out of her way, so she needs him to be by himself without his brother by his side, so it’s easier to kill him. She does some kind of magic that controls Sam’s mind and convince him that Dean is with him all the time, the fake Dean can’t talk, So Sam discovers that it’s not the real one. At the same time Dean is at the old lady’s house eating cookies (she invites him.. telling him that she have a secret to tell him) the food has something in them that would make Dean feel kind of dizzy, Dean was lucky because bobby knows that old witch and so bobby broke in, grabbed Dean and ran away shooting to keep her away from them.
When they get to Sam, Bobby tells them everything about her, Dean feels surprised, Sam looks at him like “I told you so” LOok. Bobby tells them a plan to kill her, Dean starts to throw up…they both look at him, Sam says that Dean can’t come with them because he’s not okay, they argue, Dean gets his way… they all go, Before they get close Bobby tells them that its dark in there an to stay close to each other so they won’t get lost, and the truth that this place is cursed.. with a curse that play with the mind of the weak people.. their emotions. They all get there, Because of the food that Dean he feels weak.. So its easier for him to get lost.. the curse starts to play with his mind and shows him his mom…She tells him to get closer and to help her… he’s like “No,That’s not real”, But as soon as he takes one step closer to her he gets hit on his head. Sam and Bobby realize that Dean’s lost so they try to get a hold of him, They Call and Call, they both could hear the ring tone … so they follow the sound of it, Sam sees Dean’s phone on the ground, So they take the same way and they get to the house, They break in when she’s about to kill Dean…Bobby shoots her over and over and over again but it doesn’t even hurt her … it pushes her away but it doesn’t hurt her …She’s not dead.
Sam sees a necklace that she ware… with out thinking Sam jumps on her and he takes it off, he screams at Bobby “Now, do it Now !”

Bobby shoots her like three or four times and this bright …bright lights comes out of her, suddenly everything is white, then it’s all over.

Dean is saying “Son Of a Bitch !”, they get out, when they get to the car the whole place behind them explode with Darkness and Fire.
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